Feedback

I have received my feedback for my 3 rough cuts and I have to completely change my double page spread as the photo has too much going on and there isn't enough writing in the article. I also need to add a lot of text onto my front cover as there is too much white space, I also need to add some type of background and preferably change the logo. So I have a lot to work to do however I really want a good mark so I'm excited.